I thought the story itself was good. I liked the whole mail order concept and the 7 brothers on the ranch that were all bachelors with a mom wanting to change that. This is the kind of story I enjoy. I see the potential for more stories about these characters.
I thought the writing itself needs some improvement. Whether intended or not, the dialogue was immature. Some topics were repeated too many times. I kept reading to the end because I really wanted to know how it was going to turn out, though.
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