Wednesday, July 7, 2021

Accidental Mail Order Bride by J. S. Cooper

I thought the story itself was good.  I liked the whole mail order concept and the 7 brothers on the ranch that were all bachelors with a mom wanting to change that.  This is the kind of story I enjoy.  I see the potential for more stories about these characters.

I thought the writing itself needs some improvement.  Whether intended or not, the dialogue was immature.  Some topics were repeated too many times.  I kept reading to the end because I really wanted to know how it was going to turn out, though.

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