I didn’t have a problem reading BABY SURPRISE from cover to cover. It is the type of story that always has the reader thinking “what is going to happen next?”
This is a fairly typical one night stand baby and the mom ends up working for the unsuspecting dad at some point. There were several parts of the story that could have been developed better, so I think there were some missed opportunities to add some meat to the story in areas that would have appealed to me more.
Christopher’s reaction upon finding out Alicia had a child felt odd. You’ll see what I mean. It is a decent story with issues in the writing structure.
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