THE INTERVIEW started off with a bang and caught my interest immediately. I had a hard time reading it, however. The dialogue was just not very smooth to me. I had to keep tracking back to see who some of the comments were attributable to. If there were more than two in the conversation, it was more difficult to follow.
Finally, I love a book with steam and snarky commentary. In this case the innuendos were overdone and detracted from the story. Overall, I really thought this could be an excellent story with some better content editing.
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