Ryder and Dakota had years of history. DON’T FORGET ME TOMORROW is a story of the bad boy trying to make good, keep his girl safe, and love her little boy.
The story is good. There are “I did not see that coming” moments. The romance is spicy, intense and even frustrating at times.
The writing could use some tweaking on over used adjectives and repetitive descriptive passages. Just something to take a look at outside of what is a good story.
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