The story is good but the delivery a little rough. The characters were appealing. When they interacted it was confusing at times. A person would not indicate any concern or interest for the other, then they would suddenly have their emotions involved.
I think many of my concerns with the story are with editing. I could tell things were left out and then referred to later as if they weren’t.
So, while somewhat OTT, I did enjoy the story quite a bit but these things were noticeable.
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