The entire story idea is really very good with just a few things that happen that seemed a little unbelievable for the scenario. But, that is the creative license with fiction.
Lettie and Archer are an unlikely couple, but their desire for one another exceeded their circumstances in a Romeo and Juliet sort of way. Lettie is smart and loyal, but when her loyalties are not returned she finds a better outlet for them. Archer had to take a very big leap of faith to trust her.
In my opinion, the final confrontation and conclusion seemed a little too neat. There were a lot of rabbits pulled out of the hat without foundation. There were things that didn’t fit with the way a mob family operates.
I thought this was a really clever story and the romance between Lettie and Archer was had all the best elements of a steamy relationship that evolved to love.
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